This activity is about Turing Negative into Positive. The thing that I found easy were how to make a negative comment into a positive comment. I'm looking forward to your feedback.
Hi Harmeet, I like the way you used animation on your slides. That is really cool. Your post reminded me to always be polite and kind. Next time, check your animations to make sure they don't disappear too quickly.
I liked the way you added some animations. Next time make your animations slower so we can read your writing. Did you think about making your sentences different?
Hi Harmeet. I like the way you put your cross and tick so we can read it.Did you think of making your animations a bit slower? This reminded me to always be kind.
Hi Harmeet I liked how you added a lot of animation to your negative and positive comments and added some interesting words. Did you think about making the animations faster? Maybe you could try making your sentences longer next time.
Hi Harmeet, I like the way you used animation on your slides. That is really cool. Your post reminded me to always be polite and kind. Next time, check your animations to make sure they don't disappear too quickly.
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you added some animations. Next time make your animations slower so we can read your writing. Did you think about making your sentences different?
ReplyDeleteHi Harmeet. I like the way you put your cross and tick so we can read it.Did you think of making your animations a bit slower? This reminded me to always be kind.
ReplyDeleteHi Harmeet I liked how you added a lot of animation to your negative and positive comments and added some interesting words. Did you think about making the animations faster? Maybe you could try making your sentences longer next time.
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